I am a Year 8 student at St Pius X School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 7 and my teacher is Mrs Tui.
Thursday, May 17, 2012
Tweety falls down
There was a little bird named Tweety. She fell out of her nest and onto the ground. Tweety cried and cried, but no one heard her. Just then Earl the squirrel came and suggested that she should try climb the tree. Tweety tried but she couldn't get any grip on the tree. Suddenly Mat the cat came and said to Tweety she should try flapping her wings. Tweety flapped her wings and to her amazement she started to fly up into the sky. She landed safely into her nest and chirped happily. Tweety was relieved. She lived happily ever after.
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Wow Angelica,
ReplyDeleteYou really out done yourself, you are a really good writer. I like the way you said " Tweety flapped her wings into her AMAZEMENT she started to fly up into the sky". Keep up the good work, and continue to write more.